3.11 - 3.16 Revised/Edited Draft
Turn in your revised/edited draft:
- Introduction
- 3 body sections - each with a heading and one (maybe two) paragraphs
- Conclusion
- Bibliography
Your teacher may give you some feedback you can apply to your final product chosen from the project choices for publishing your biography.
Assessment: 10 marks
5 marks:Body
Body Section 1 - Early Life or alternate title, well developed paragraph with a clear topic sentence, sequential order (may have two paragraphs)
Body Section 2 - Later Life or alternate title, well developed paragraph with a clear topic sentence, sequential order (May have two paragraphs)
Body Section 3 - Challenges/Accomplishments or alternate title, well developed paragraph with a clear topic sentence, sequential order (May have two paragraphs)
Conclusion - well-written, leaves the reader feeling satisfied, relates to the big question introduced in the introduction.
2 marks:
Bibliography - This is a new skill. You've made obvious effort to follow directions and format this well.
3 marks:
Revising and Editing - Evidence of applying targetted skills from lesson: sentence variety (lengths and composition), use of transition words, avoiding repetition, headings properly capitalized, no run-on sentences